Haiku: kite Posted bya.d.matthiasJuly 27, 2018July 27, 2018Posted inhaiku, micro-poetry, micropoetry, one-word-prompt, poem, poetry, prose, word-of-the-day She yet flew a kite Rather than placate the wind And found happiness art: Evening Cool by Shinsui Itō TwitterTumblrLike this:Like Loading... Published by a.d.matthias no w here View more posts
I intended it to be more like relinquishing the obsession to control the uncontrollable. Your interpretation works, too, though. Thanks LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Yes, it’s all good. Only the writer really knows what they “intended,” but that doesn’t mean he/she can’t be shown a new way to look at their own words; that’s what makes it interesting/exciting LikeLiked by 1 person
Never thought of it that way, but you are right. Nice talking to you. Have a great weekend. LikeLiked by 1 person
She moves to her own beat. I really like this.
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I intended it to be more like relinquishing the obsession to control the uncontrollable. Your interpretation works, too, though. Thanks
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Shows you how poetry can be up for interpretation.
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Yes, it’s all good. Only the writer really knows what they “intended,” but that doesn’t mean he/she can’t be shown a new way to look at their own words; that’s what makes it interesting/exciting
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Never thought of it that way, but you are right. Nice talking to you. Have a great weekend.
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You, too. Thanks again
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rather than placate the wind……I adore this!
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Thank you, Susan
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